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Benefit of the Doubt Challenge [Dec. 2nd, 2006|04:11 am]
svu100

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[sterling_sky]
[mood |creativecreative]
[music |Everybody Finds Out - Fleetwood Mac]

Rating: G
Word Count: 105
Summary: Olivia's thoughts during "Choreographed".
Response to Prompt/Challenge "Benefit of the Doubt".

I'm really hoping I've got this LiveJournal cut text thing right this time...




She's not really sure where she stands with him anymore, where she stands after everyone has left him. She came back though, and that has to count for something. So she’s giving him the benefit of the doubt for now, letting him wrench this guy’s arm and play Pacino. She knows that her words are salt even as she is saying them, but if a comment on his anger management gets this guy to give them something, anything, it will be worth it. Even if it breaks them both, this one tiny comment, she has to do it. She has to be a cop first.
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[User Picture]From: jellybean2662
2006-12-02 12:08 pm (UTC)
:) Nice.
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[User Picture]From: sterling_sky
2006-12-03 01:01 am (UTC)

Thank you!

I really appreciate your comment. It is only my second attempt at fic, so I wasn't quite sure how it would play out. Glad you enjoyed!
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[User Picture]From: morningafter2
2006-12-03 06:57 am (UTC)
That was a really good insight into Olivia's thoughts. Good job portraying post-flower-child Olivia.
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[User Picture]From: sterling_sky
2006-12-04 12:16 am (UTC)
Thank you! I really appreciate all the kind words for this, I am such a newbie to fanfic writing.
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[User Picture]From: morningafter2
2006-12-04 12:44 am (UTC)
If this is one of your first fics, then I'm doubly impressed. Keep writing; as they say, the only way to get better is to practice. <---commonly shortened to "practice makes perfect", but I never state things simply. :p

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[User Picture]From: sterling_sky
2006-12-04 01:01 am (UTC)

Simpy stated: Thanks!

Yeah, this is only my second. I got on a writing kick this weekend and churned out a few.
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